Written by: Muskaan Kaushik
Edited by: Saptarchi Biswas
Illustrated by: Deepshikha Banerjee
I was fighting, fighting with that last spark of strength
But I couldn’t anymore, my body betrayed me.
My muscles ached, the salt stung my eyes,
And my lungs begged for one, just one release.
But giving up seemed so easy
To let the water take me,
To let it win.
Then I did. I gave in.
The grueling struggle ceased, the chaos stilled,
And the crushing pressure became an inescapable embrace,

Firm yet tender, like a lover holding me close.
The currents softly stroked my hair,
The ocean’s silence dulled the world’s noise,
And in that silence, all my worries dissolved.
No frantic limbs, no desperate fights.
Only stillness.
Pain melted into comfort,
A weightless release,
A quiet surrender to the depths.
And oh, the irony
It was almost cruel,
To die cradled in the arms of the giver of life
To be consumed by the very thing
That sustains the world.
What a masterpiece!! Such beautiful writing!! Keep it up❤️ Kudos to You!!
Such a powerful and considerate determination to accept what comes your way rather then give up. Thoughtful!
A powerful piece that captures the struggle of fighting and surrendering. The vivid imagery makes it deeply moving and memorable.
I really like the depth of the poem......too good😍🤩
Great Composition and insightful meaning